Kumusta. Last week we finished off our Cyclone slide show that going to talk about on our diorama. I had a group that helped me to answer the questions. We planned it first before we researched it. So I'm proud off my group that we answered the questions because we helped each other doing one by one questions and we worked hard together to finish it .
We checked all the questions and answer it.
So here is our Cyclone slide show that I'm going to show you.
Thank you for looking on our Cyclone slide show and don't forget to give me your thought feedback. Hope you enjoy our slide show.
BYE BYE!! Have a great weekend...
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 24 May 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Talofa lava Lhysette,
ReplyDeletewell done on your cyclone DLO, I really like how you got everything in balanced like how your writing is just one color not in 10 colors. I also really like how wisely you chose your photos for your DLO.
What I think you should work on is balancing your photos and making sure its public, because you got one photo showing how a cyclones works and the photos was not from you. And next time you should work on the tree photo cause you got a photo of a tree and then a background of a tree.
Thank you for sharing out your cyclone DLO, I have learnt some things to keep me safe. Anyway good job and keep it up, I hope you all the best in your work. Thank you Lhysette.
Blessing.