Hi everyone, welcome for my another blog post about writing. I have learning this since a bit while time ago, and this time I'm here to tell you what we did first. We pick one topic sentence that you like to do and write with some ideas and also at the rest of your paragraphs just give some example to make it more clear. I pick this topic sentence word because it kind of remind me when I write a story about the "Two Girl". This topic sentence word was call " Last night I had the worst dream of my life"..
That's was all I learn't about the topic sentence.
I think that some of the word that my teacher teach us I kinda forget some words, and some explaining because I learn't this since it's a bit while time ago.
Here is my topic sentence that I made...
Last night I had the worst dream of my life. I was alone in the dark forest hearing some creepy sounds,and seeing some frightening shadow that I see in my dream and I just don’t have any idea where did they come from. As I saw those kinds of things in my dream I started running in my dreams and hide in the big tree,I hide because I was so nervous that time. Suddenly I woke up on bed and take a big breath, I just to myself “ Calm down” but I can’t because in that dream I saw those kinds of things when I’m walking home at night, and I just remember what kind of shadow are they but I can’t tell you because I’m really scared what going to happen to me next time, because I swear that was the worst dream happened to me that night..
Thank you guys, and leave some thoughtful and helpful comment. See you next time for my another blog post. Byeeee!!
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Tuesday, 4 September 2018
Thursday, 23 August 2018
My three fairy tales
Hi guys, for this blog post is a about the Venn Diagram three fairy tales. We also started reading the "Three little pigs", "Jack and the beanstalk" and the last one that we read for a fast few days was "Goldilocks and the three bears" after we read all of these story Miss Mclachlan make the first Venn diagram that include the two story to see if there is any match on those and now we trying to finished to make our Three fairy tales, and I'm trying to combined the two stories if there is any other word that is a same sentence. We have fun doing it and here is the Venn Diagram that I'm talking.

Thank you guys for exploring my Three fairy tales story, see you next time fro my another blog post. Don't forget to give me a thoughtful and helpful feedback. BYEEEE.....
Thank you guys for exploring my Three fairy tales story, see you next time fro my another blog post. Don't forget to give me a thoughtful and helpful feedback. BYEEEE.....
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